Friday, August 22, 2014

Expressive Writing, Losing Someone.

Losing someone that is very close to you is nothing you could ever imagine. Emotions hit you as you cry, the pain feels as if it'll never end.

As I sat staring out the window I couldn't think of anything but the sounds of everyone else crying. 

It took me awhile to realise that I've lost someone, and then it hits me. When I heard the sound of my mum crying, I started, a flood of tears rushed down my face like a waterfall. 

Days past, and I still wait to see her, and then the day comes. As I stood at the door of the Funeral Home, I knew that I couldn't walk in, I didn't want to feel the pain any more, then I hear the sound of my mum crying again, I felt the pain, the pain never ended. 


  1. Wow Deja, I suggest next time you underline adjectives. But Majority I thought your writing was very touching and dramatic.

    1. Thank you Siniva for your positive comment. :)


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