Losing someone that is very close to you is nothing you could ever imagine. Emotions hit you as you cry, the pain feels as if it'll never end.
As I sat staring out the window I couldn't think of anything but the sounds of everyone else crying.
It took me awhile to realise that I've lost someone, and then it hits me. When I heard the sound of my mum crying, I started, a flood of tears rushed down my face like a waterfall.
Days past, and I still wait to see her, and then the day comes. As I stood at the door of the Funeral Home, I knew that I couldn't walk in, I didn't want to feel the pain any more, then I hear the sound of my mum crying again, I felt the pain, the pain never ended.
It took me awhile to realise that I've lost someone, and then it hits me. When I heard the sound of my mum crying, I started, a flood of tears rushed down my face like a waterfall.
Days past, and I still wait to see her, and then the day comes. As I stood at the door of the Funeral Home, I knew that I couldn't walk in, I didn't want to feel the pain any more, then I hear the sound of my mum crying again, I felt the pain, the pain never ended.
Wow Deja, I suggest next time you underline adjectives. But Majority I thought your writing was very touching and dramatic.
ReplyDeleteThank you Siniva for your positive comment. :)
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